humility triggers internal swells.
starlight cracks and flickers in the night.
chains grittle and spray. blood and
bones paint the way. gravity
claims the tawdry refrain.
planted starboard she
relishes the sight.
–prompt borrowed from sundaywhirl.wordpress.com
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Good use of the words in such shortness of verse.
Thanks I let the picture I took of a tall ship guide me. I appreciate the feedback, this was a stretch for me.