Poetry, Post-a-Day

half a life, no longer a wife

Posted by Wanda Olugbala on

Area of Refuge

half is considerably less than
all when there are full size bills in this medium
size life with extra large shoes to fit
mini-size you.

#OctPoWriMo Day 15
#OctPoWriMo Day 15

12 Comments Add yours

  1. thehonkinggoose's avatar thehonkinggoose says:
    October 15, 2014 at 11:20 pm

    I really, really like this a lot. 🙂

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    1. Wanda Olugbala's avatar Wanda Olugbala says:
      October 17, 2014 at 11:59 pm

      Thank you.

      Reply
  2. cjswriting's avatar cjswriting says:
    October 16, 2014 at 12:52 am

    Very nice! I love what you did with this 🙂

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    1. Wanda Olugbala's avatar Wanda Olugbala says:
      October 17, 2014 at 11:58 pm

      Thanks for the read.

      Reply
  3. sueve's avatar shilyot says:
    October 16, 2014 at 4:08 am

    Surprisingly, there is soon so much more :

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    1. Wanda Olugbala's avatar Wanda Olugbala says:
      October 20, 2014 at 12:09 am

      Thank you for the read. I appreciate the comment.

      Reply
  4. Dawn D. McKenzie's avatar Dawn D says:
    October 16, 2014 at 6:48 am

    I like this! I am always amazed at how people manage to say so much in so few words!
    Good luck paying the full-size bills 🙂

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    1. Wanda Olugbala's avatar Wanda Olugbala says:
      October 17, 2014 at 11:58 pm

      Thank you.

      Reply
  5. Payal Agarwal's avatar Payal Agarwal says:
    October 16, 2014 at 2:08 pm

    Powerpacked!

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    1. Wanda Olugbala's avatar Wanda Olugbala says:
      October 17, 2014 at 11:58 pm

      Thanks for the read.

      Reply
  6. shanjeniah's avatar shanjeniah says:
    October 16, 2014 at 10:35 pm

    Concise and potent. Sending you prosperous thoughts!

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    1. Wanda Olugbala's avatar Wanda Olugbala says:
      October 17, 2014 at 11:57 pm

      Thank you on both counts.

      Reply

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